The Official Writing Challenge
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Real nice story, some power in the message. Your citation was seperate from the quote, always proof in preview before submitting. I liked the Big Dipper metaphor.
Being a God and nature lover I found the language in your story soothed and inspired me. Some grammar usage distracted me but overall: a good offering!
Wonderful! I love the idea of a "Big Dipper God." What a great truth you have so well explained from your own personal experience.
Loved this, I especially like your revelation and analogy of the Big Digger and God. Keep writing (and keep getting those revelations).