The Official Writing Challenge
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05/02/05
Well done! Nice twist!
05/03/05
A winner for sure.
I simply loved your entry.

Kathy
Now that brought tears to my eyes!!
This was really, really good. You developed it very well and kept me engrossed from beginning to end. I especially liked the poem. You set a mood of anxious moments and capped it off with a beautiful ending. I thought you did a fine job with this week's topic. Well done.
I thought this story flowed very nicely--kept me reading and interested. The only thing left to wonder is, why didn't he repent [of his drinking?] Thought the ending was weak for how the rest of the story went. Still good though.
05/07/05
Lovely. I especially liked your last line, "And thank God for the Christmas Presence I’ll never forget!"
05/09/05
Anthony, Congratulations on an excellent win in your very first writing challenge. 2nd place in the Level 2 Champion Challenge AND 1st place in the Editors' Choice. That is really quite an achievement. Well done. I know you've only just dipped your toe in the Challenge waters, but now it's time for you to move up to Level 3. You are definitely ready for it. Congratulations again! With love, Deb
05/09/05
Oops ... guess I should say that I'm the Challenge Coordinator, or that comment about moving up a level will just sound rude. With love (again) Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
Anthony,
This was beautifully written, typical human emotions that seem to drive us, meeting with the suprise of God Almighty's loving touch. I am impressed. Nice win, you deserved it.
How delightful! Wonderful story with a great build up of tension, only to be released with a beautiful ending. LOVED it. Congratulations on a well-deserved win!
Anthony,
Welcome to FaithWriters and congratulations on this big win with your first entry! Loved your story -- a skillful combination of poetry and prose, with a great focus on priorities of Christmas. I'll be looking forward to more of your work!
You brought tears to my eyes too....wonderfully creative!
Tony, that was truly a wonderful story! Wow what a great ending! You are an amazing writter with a lot of talent. Keep up the good work and your blessings are just around the corner.
Great! The true meaning of Christmas