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07/13/07
Good thoughts on the topic. I especially like the specific examples you gave of people who had confidence in the Lord in spite of their troubles.
07/14/07
Like the adage, "God helps those who help themselves" the idea that self-confidence is a worthy goal has become almost foundational to post-modern thought. The points of your essay are clear and the topic was evident throughout.
07/15/07
This is a great essay — a bit of editing and you'll have something to sell, as well as tell. For example, near the end I think you meant "breeds" rather than "breads" and it should be René Descartes. Good work.