The Official Writing Challenge
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07/12/07
I found the content good. Breaking the the piece into paragraphs whould help the readabilty. Good effort!
I am with you on these thoughts.

I agree with the previous coment that putting spaces between paragraphs would make it easier to read. I often preview the articles that I write to check it for readability.

The world needs these kinds of presentations. Keep on writting about the goodness of God.

Look up Ephesians 2:10. This is my favorite verse about God's desire to remake us through Jesus.
07/15/07
You have some really good thoughts. I like this line you used describing feelings of people once they've had plastic surgery, "they often discover that they are still empty." Thanks!