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07/12/07
I enjoyed your piece of work. You did a good job contrasting 'self-confidence' and confidence found in God. Your 'showing' of how God deals with any confidence other that that found in Him, was well said.
It preaches! I hope you consider puting this article up for availability to people who might want to use it.

Note, I caught a couple things that you might do to improve it. There is a word missing in one of the paragraphs in the middle. Also, consider tying the article back to the idea about "dents". This will give you a package.
07/15/07
Very important reminder and quite well-written. I personally think this line was the key to all the rest: "It is not the deed, but the enabling power behind it that determines its value in the eyes of God."
Nice work. Oh, I liked the "con-fi-'dents'" idea, too.