The Official Writing Challenge
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Great job! Important message. I hope you perfect it and put it where those who don't love Christ can read it.

I caught a counterdiction. one paragraph heading was "Accept and celebrate yourself." This a worldly ideology that I don't see reflected in your writing. It also counterdicts your final chapter title "Take the focus off yourself"

I think you could just drop the titles. I have given a deep critique becasue I really like this work!
07/13/07
Good devotional! Makes me think!
Thought provoking, which was your aim. Writing wise some fine tuning would be good. As a writing friend told me, "Rewrite, rewrite, rewrite, and rewrite again." Not what a writer wants to hear, but it hones our skills so we can be ministers with a pen. Persevere! Connie
07/16/07
Hi; I very much liked the layout of your entry and iys content. Good job!