The Official Writing Challenge
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Good advice here. Presented well. I would have liked a little more consolation after the counseling. There seems to be more that needs to be said. Very good as far as it goes. And I liked the way the story was presented.
06/16/07
Great title. This is an important message for teens - I think, though, that you need more counseling, at least to start, in the speech. This did feel authentic.
Good writing. This is a very important message. I like it. Nice job.
07/25/07
Good job with a good message. Congratulations on your placing. The story flowed well and you held my interest from start to finish. God bless and keep writing.