The Official Writing Challenge
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Cute! I love the text talking (or whatever you call it...not a teen!).
Very cute account of the trials of homework. Been there. Done that. (Did you know a grossly burned egg smells like burning feathers?) Be sure to air the house before you try this one. Good job.
06/16/07
Cute and fun. I think at least the beginning of this might be more appealing to teens/young adults if told from their perspective rather than the parent's. Otherwise, I enjoyed the antics and action.
06/17/07
Cute, but I had trouble identifing the audience.