The Official Writing Challenge
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06/14/07
Amazing. Sounds like a true story. This one gave me the goose bumps too. God is awesome! Very good story!
06/16/07
A modern-time Jonah for teens, I think. Very compelling. This DID read as true. Wonder if it is? Great dialogue.
Wonderful, heartfelt story. A winner, I think?
This is a great story. It kept my attention. Nice job.
This held my attention from beginning to end. It follows a logical path. Like the other readers, I'm wondering if it's true, or at least, based on a true story. In any case, it's excellent.
06/19/07
Good story! Very interesting and compelling to read. Your descriptions are so vivid, I almost felt like I was watching a movie.
Great story. Thank God that He is a God of second chances - if He wasn't, we'd all be goners!