The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! This is great. A "This Present Darkness" and "Cinderella" wrapped into one. Good job. Linda's thougts were so real and I was happy for a happy ending to the story. Congrats.
This is a wonderful piece. Our teens need to see the potential of having heavenly protection in their lives, with all the possibility that brings to them. You're gifted and I look forward to reading more of your postings.
Oh, this is EXCELLENT! Your characterization and story development are wonderful.
oooh, this is wonderful and perfect for teens.
Absolutely love it! Don't change a thing. :)
I like the two-sided story, and I'm sure most teens would, too! Great job!
This is a most satisfying read! No loose ends left dangling---I particularly enjoyed your bringing Britney back on the scene in her much different role. The behind-the-scenes look at the spiritual battle gave the depth of understanding I'm sure teens would (or should) appreciate. I hope you find a market for this story that God will make good use of for the Kingdom. Great job, Friend!
I love everything about this piece, and most especially the ending.
I was a bit confused at first but then I figured out what was going on. I especially like the part about the mom praying. This is so true about moms and daughters. I thought this was a absolutley (sp) great essay. god was blessing you are you wrote.
This is an outstanding story. I hope it places.
Good job!
I don't know how I missed this, but I've been very busy lately. It is a lovely example of prayer and forgiveness. No wonder it was a winner.