The Official Writing Challenge
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Cute and fun! I really like this one. The voice is real. I can relate to her feelings. Good job.
06/15/07
Great voice - it is right on! Wish you had more words to expand this - that dreaded word limit, eh? I noticed a couple of punctuation error, but nothing major. Great detail.
06/16/07
Very cool entry. This sounds like a teen wrote it - so natural. Sad that 9 is considered "chunky". :( I read an entry about an anorexic before this one, and I see the connection. Love the last line!
Oh, the shyness of moving through teen years. Good story.
06/21/07
Yes, the voice is great. Good job!