The Official Writing Challenge
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06/15/07
Very deep and moving. You capture that teen desperation very well in this piece! Your paragraph spacing was a bit inconsistent and distracting, but that is an easy enough fix. Good reminders for ALL of us.
06/16/07
Great teen article! I like the poetry-prose mix. I couldn't tell which one I was reading, but it didn't matter once I got into it. I REALLY like this one! :)
06/19/07
Very moving.
06/19/07
You brought out the feelings of a young woman very well. I could feel the struggle to find the woman within. Good job.
06/20/07
I liked this a lot. Thanks for sharing