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How sad and tragic. This story has a powerful message.

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Nice job!
06/15/07
Very sad - this would certainly wake ME up as a teen! Great job showing the tragic results of bad choices.
Oh my! How sad. It should really touch the teens who read it. Maybe make a "turn around" in their lives.
Very sad and thought-provoking. Heartbreaking.