The Official Writing Challenge
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06/15/07
You did an EXCEPTIONAL job of getting into your main character's mind and thoughts - this sure felt like an authentic experience! I love the "coincidence" of her taking that magazine home. This felt raw and realistic. It seemed a bit pat at the end, but otherwise, this is very strong.
Your MC's feelings and emotions were very real. Great job on letting us "in". Keep writing!
I don't know if this is a typical teen or not, but it's sure to fit a lot of them.
06/19/07
I've been there with the religious questions! Your story will appeal to any teen or adult who wants what's really missing; God, not religion.