The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a very cute story. I love reading the Christmas story from different angles. Very imaginitive!
Very creative rendition of the nativity. I think it would make a good children's story as well. I enjoyed reading this.
This was beautifully written. I imagined myself there, witnessing the most beautiful event in history.

Chick was a wonderful character that I imagine could be used in many other children's stories. Nice job.
05/07/05
There weres some lovely descriptions here. Well done!