The Official Writing Challenge
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I'm a little confused here. Your parents probably know what you are saying about the music, etc. But as a reader I don't have a clue. However, this is a good letter to someone who does understand the implications.
06/15/07
I definitely wanted more here! More detail about the back story of this, more on what the teen is going through - but that is a sign of a well-written piece. Keep writing!
This letter seemed very authentic. However, I wanted to know more. Nice job. Keep writing!
The letter seemed to assume I knew more than I actually did. The idea is good. The voice was real. I just had a hard time getting some of it.
07/23/07
Hi Paul. Forgive me for contacting you this way, but I don't know if you have the private messenger. I've sent you a message, but if you don't get it, could you send me a private message immediately, with your email address. It's about your latest Challenge entry. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)