The Official Writing Challenge
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This is good writing. A possible view of life after death.
06/15/07
Very intense and visual. Much to think about.
06/16/07
I love your writing style! Good descriptions throughout. My "vision" of the judgment isn't quite the same - I thought we were about to see the MC condemned. :) - tut I still enjoyed your engaging story, and LOVEd the end, of course. Gave me chills and a different viewpoint. Nice job! :)
06/16/07
Thanks.

Lot's of us are unsure about our efforts here.

Pauly
Very thought provoking. Teens would love this, I would think. Nice job.
This would make an interesting pre-sermon skit I think.