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What a great and fun adventure for these two kids. Nice job.
Magic and adventure--two favorites of children. You wove the story together very well. I liked the brother-sister pair. You could take them on other adventures.
Good adventure story! I also believe you should consider featuring this pair in a series of adventures. Go for it!
Good account of the flood for children. A unique way to present it. I'm sure children will love it.
06/24/07
Interesting story! It's a nice way to have the children explore the Bible firsthand.
I just read this to my daughter. She said, "That's funny." She enjoyed it and wants to read about another of Ike and Issy's adventures. Thanks for this.