The Official Writing Challenge
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06/07/07
What a sweet memory.
06/10/07
Very cute story and sweet childhood memories are nicely arranged in this treasure of a story. Lord bless,Janice
06/12/07
Nice memory. I think you could make this into a really good story for children with a little reworking. Perhaps a bit more "show" and a little less "tell." Draw out the character of grandpa more. Show us how sticky the berry juice was on your hands. It's a lovely memory and I think a lot of children will be able to relate to it. They all know about trying to win and get the prize. Nice piece.
06/14/07
Wonderful family memories here.