The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a very sweet story.
06/10/07
Your story would really engage the toddlers, I'm sure. Nicely written for the youngest readers!
06/12/07
My favortite line was about the "two finger birthday". I think that's a good description that would be used with a child. This was an entertaining children's story.