The Official Writing Challenge
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Very sweet! I enjoyed it and loved the message at the end. How great to have a book that points kids to the Bible.
This is a great story of how dreams can change when we hear bible stories and know of Jesus' love.
In Jesus' Name,
A really lovely story that gently encourages children to enjoy all the wonderful adventures in the Bible. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Very sweet story with a terrific nudge for kids to find adventure in the Scriptures and their "superheroes" in the likes of Paul, Jesus, Moses, Elijah, etc.! I was going to pick a favorite sentence or passage,but there were too many of them, so I'll just say that I really enjoyed all your colorful descriptions! Great writing! :)
It's been said, "as the twig is bent, so grows the tree."
Leading young ones to Bible stories lilke this is a wonderful way to grow an entire forest! Well done.
Very good!
Nice story for children. What an imagination!
CONGRATULATIONS on your "Highly Commended"!!! I bet Dylan will be excited, too! :)