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Very touching. I think this story would comfort a child who lost a parent.
Your story touches on an important reminder for us; freedom may cost a family dearly and soldiers always leave behind many who loved them and miss them always.
Such an emotional topic...I wanted the little girl to be comforted. I'm glad her grandfather was there. I'm wondering if this is a true story?
Nicely done, a story of what might have been - I am assuming. Thank goodness for grandpa's, right? Great job, as usual...a tear for the eye and a lump for the throat.