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Very touching. I think this story would comfort a child who lost a parent.
06/10/07
Your story touches on an important reminder for us; freedom may cost a family dearly and soldiers always leave behind many who loved them and miss them always.
06/12/07
Such an emotional topic...I wanted the little girl to be comforted. I'm glad her grandfather was there. I'm wondering if this is a true story?
08/07/07
Nicely done, a story of what might have been - I am assuming. Thank goodness for grandpa's, right? Great job, as usual...a tear for the eye and a lump for the throat.