The Official Writing Challenge
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06/07/07
I enjoyed this story! It reminded me a lot of "The Ugly Duckling."

Great use of descriptions and dialogue. The characters came alive and I felt as though I knew them. Interesting title, too! (Makes one curious about how the turkey is a misfit.)Good job!
06/07/07
Enjoyable story, with a deep meaning: "We should know who we are."
Very well written. Nice.
06/10/07
This is very well written and a lovely story! The message is just right for children and the characters quite appealing.
06/11/07
I heard it once said: "If you're meant to soar with the eagles, what are you doing running with turkeys?"
Is that the inspiration behind the story? What a great idea, introducing that principle to kids like this. Well done.
Wonderful story. I loved that last paragraph, especially this bit: "In a thrilling moment he felt himself lifting off the ground. Then he was soaring up, up, up, into the treetops, into the sky."