The Official Writing Challenge
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Great message and nice story. Watch out for name changes. Bart became Bert. :) My daughter and I read this together and enjoyed it. Thanks!
I loved this little story. What a great way of teaching kids that God made them just the way He wanted them.
06/10/07
Sweet story that has such a good application to our lives.
06/11/07
Very enjoyable story with an important message! With all the pressure on even young children to look, act, and talk a certain way; this piece can help children be happy being just who God made them to be! Nice job! :)
The theme of your story is one of my favorites for young or old, out identity in the One who made us, reminiscent of Max Lucado's "You Are Special." I loved the visual of Bert examining his body and wings. Excellent writing that fit the genre well.