The Official Writing Challenge
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Very fun. It might be good to break each event up into a separate short book and make a series of the cat's adventures. Also, If you are going to write in first person, I might leave out the "Once upon a time..." intro. Good job.
What a fun story. I could so easily picture this as a children's book, complete with pictures of a fluffy white kitten.
Really cute. I am sure that every child will love this story. I can also see it in the form of an illustrated book.
06/09/07
Cute and very sweet.
A really sweet story. I am a cat lover, so this is one of my favorites.
Sweet story. You did a good job bringing us into the world of the kitty. Kids would love this cozy story.
I like Snowball. He's my kind of kitten.