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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Write something suitable for CHILDREN (05/31/07)

TITLE: The Little Adventurer
By Denise Pienaar
06/01/07


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I am a hunter, brave and strong,
Deep in the jungle I will go,
Softly, slowly I creep along,
For thereís a tiger there, I know,
Heís big and fierce and loud he roars,
What do you thing of that?
But I am not afraid because
Heís just our tabby cat.

I am a pirate, ugly and mean,
And on a ship Iíll sail away,
The biggest ship youíve ever seen,
And treasure I will find today,
Gold and silver, lots to spare,
But can I go that far?
My ship will not sail anywhere,
Because itís Mommyís car.

I am a diver, happy and free,
Under the water Iíll explore,
Down I go so much to see,
Fish and crabs and so much more.
Sharks may come and swim around,
But they do not scare me,
Here I am quite safe and sound,
For I am in the bath, you see.

I am an astronaut, proud and tall,
My spaceship is so big and fast,
The time is now, inside I crawl,
And zoom away to space at last,
My day is done, I rest my head,
And pray that God me safe will keep,
My rocket is my cozy bed,
Itís late and I must go to sleep.


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Kristen Hester06/07/07
Wonderful! I would read this to my children! I can just picture the wonderful illustrations.
Loretta Leonard06/07/07
What a clever way to illustrate a child's imagination! Wouldn't it be great if we could have that same childlike quality as adults? Great job!
Esther Gellert06/08/07
I read this to three of my children and they enjoyed it. I think this would make a fantastic children's book, with pictures to fit, and maybe a few extra verses. I really, really liked it.
Seema Bagai 06/08/07
Wonderful poem. Creative and will appeal to children.
Joanne Sher 06/09/07
Absolutely charming and fun and sweet! Loved this! Any kid would adore this!
Verna Cole Mitchell 06/09/07
Imaginative and clever--excellent pictures and fun for a child
Mo 06/09/07
Cute!
Jacquelyn Horne06/10/07
Wonderful child's poetry. Good job.
Jeanette Oestermyer 06/10/07
What a sweet short article for little ones. It shows a side of children's imagination. Good job
Myrna Noyes06/11/07
Delightful poem showcasing the imaginative lives of children! This is well-written and a real enjoyment to read! Great job! :)
Angela Posey-Arnold06/11/07
Obviously you have a heart for children and the way they are inspired. Great poem for kids.
Sara Harricharan 06/12/07
I will echo the comments of how wonderful this is! Reminds me of my brothers. You captured the heart and soul of something very special here. Excellent writing!
Catrina Bradley 06/14/07
Love it! I was imagining the picture book this could be as I was reading. Fabulous job! :)