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This piece brought tears to my eyes. I've done something similar. Very well written. And I know of no greater "adventure" than parenting. Wonderful story.
06/01/07
Good job & message!
Sadly, this is often the case with little ones. Those who say "make the parents be responsible" do not know the peril they could be putting the child in. The safety of the child MUST always come first. Good story. I felt your love and compassion.
06/02/07
Yep--definitely an adventure!

I felt slightly distanced from your protagonist as she never had a name. That would have made her feel more real, and less "generic."

Blessings on all who undertake such a noble adventure...