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06/01/07
This is a very interesting historical story. I am aware of the Lollards and was hoping you'd have a note at the bottom of your piece to tell us if it's based on an actual event. Great message of mercy given to us by the brave priest! Thank you for sharing this! Good job! :)
06/03/07
Very good story, and you did a great job with the archaic dialogue. Nicely done.
06/06/07
Excellent job with the period dialogue especially - a captivating read.
06/07/07
CONGRATULATIONS, David, on your well-deserved win!! Awesome! :)
Congratulations on your win, David! I see the lollards have returned. ;-)
06/08/07
Well done, David. You are fast moving through the ranks. Loved the way you made it clear which side was which through dialogue rather than info dropping. And just enough for a person who wasn't aware of the history to catch on. A fast paced visual piece. yeggy
I'm not usually one for battle scenes, but this is great. The only thing I would change is the title, which doesn't do this majestic piece justice.
This is some heavy writing. I can see it in a historical novel.
I can see why you enjoy writing this genre because you seem to have a natural talent for it. The story flows quickly without seeming forced and the action and dialogue all seem authentic. Yes, please keep writing and expanding and sharing your gift.