The Official Writing Challenge
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06/02/07
Interesting adventure! Good plot.
06/03/07
Fun story!

A few minor word choice issues (bag seat/ back seat, and the word "rationalize" used incorrectly), and it'd be easier on the eyes with spaces between paragraphs.

There aren't many entries this week with this level of heart-stopping adventure--good job!