The Official Writing Challenge
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06/01/07
Interesting correlation between a roller coaster ride and our roller coaster lives! You did a good job of comparing the two and left us with a powerful message,as well! Thank you for sharing this! :)
What an interesting way to write a comparison. I really liked how this was done. Very well done. Great message. Good job!!
06/03/07
Very apt comparison.