The Official Writing Challenge
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Very good message here. Well told.
06/02/07
Nice adventure & message.
06/04/07
Certainly had me holding my breath!

Good story, and good lesson.
This is an excellent story. Good title. It is exciting, well written, and a wonderful lesson well illustrated. Good job.
06/04/07
Cool!
06/06/07
I like your story. Very well done. It's good to know God, and that he can catch you when you fall.
06/06/07
I felt MY hands tensing up as if I was Tom...very clear analogy.