The Official Writing Challenge
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06/01/07
Interesting. Maybe try adding some dialogue to break up the "telling"? Intriguing title!
06/03/07
You did a good job of evoking the atmosphere of your high school days.

There are quite a few places where your writing could be tightened up, saving precious words and allowing for more plot or character development.

You've got an interesting memory to hold on to!
06/04/07
I REALLY loved this article. It put me in mind of Waynetown and Crawfordsville, Indiana's rivalry and the adventures that it spawned.

I could almost smell the exhaust from the 200 cars and feel the cool night air. I also liked the line about that Saturday Morning Buzz. How well I remember.

Thanks for a great trip down memory lane.

Pauly