The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderful story in poem form. Good pov.
I LOVE story poems, and this is a great one. The progression from crack to "dark, black void" is brilliant. This piece would be wonderful with illustrations.
This is very nice. Good work.
Wow! This kept me reading, every line, every verse, every heartache, every hurt, every pain, until love came in. Ask, seek, knock. Well done.
Excellent story! You had me hooked from that incredible first stanza...
Beautiful, beautiful poem! I loved the progression from crack to abyss and then back to crack and beyond to wholeness! There is such a powerful message here! Excellent writing! :)