The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/07
I like this. Nice writing, and good rhythm.
Good moral story here in this little poem.
05/26/07
I like this. Wonderful view of how Christians should handle their problems. Great work.
05/26/07
A good morality tale; it's a shame how many times money and/or power can spoil a relationship when substituted for God - the judge of the universe.
You did an awesome job of telling a story with your poem. Well done.
Well written. More people should heed this bit of wisdom
This sounds like it may have happened in your life. I really like the last line the most - I'm sure all of us can think of countless times when we or someone we know didn't listen to the Lord but in pride went our own way. Never a good idea. Great job!
This is a neat little story sharing an important message. Good job!
05/31/07
Congratulations. I'm glad to see you won -- I really enjoyed this poem. Good job.
05/31/07
Very nice!