The Official Writing Challenge
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05/25/07
Not sure if this is poem just because it rhymes, it's ,more like you want us to see the imagery that each stanza has.
Which is okay but work on the consistency a bit more to make the reader remember your title at the end.
It seems the title here says it all. We are not our own.
05/26/07
I was impressed with what you can do with so few words per line. That's difficult.
I agree that it helps to underline the theme especially at the end.
05/26/07
I agree with David - it is difficult to be effective using so few words per line; however, each stanza clearly makes its point. Good job.
I feel like this was straight to the point and well done, with a wonderful message. I truely enjoyed it.
05/28/07
I like this. Makes a very good point. Good job.