The Official Writing Challenge
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Thought provoking poem here. I especially liked the last line.
05/25/07
Wow! Thought-provoking, emotion filled. Good job.
05/26/07
I actually experienced this piece while reading it; a shiver of uncertainty ran through me as I stood at the darkened window watching the snow and asking God timeless questions. As I watched, the poet's attention shifted from herself to another... and in motherhood found the most glorious purpose of all. Wonderful.
Wow! That's all I can say to this thought provoking piece that reads like a testimony of hardship and pain. Yes, there is one more thing I can say, wait for the dawn. Christ's love will shine through the darkest night.
05/28/07
I really enjoyed reading this poem. Very well written, and thought provoking as you read.