The Official Writing Challenge
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Good example of what we can be in Christ.
05/26/07
A lovely poem. I like the structure and the ideas you've presented.
05/27/07
This piece reads like a wonderful hymn - the Before/With/In Christ stanzas would be a powerful chorus. I'd love to hear this set to music.
I like the before and after picture. It is so true, no matter where we came from before we knew Christ we were all of that. Well done
05/28/07
This is awesome. I like the transformation and how it flowed flawlessly.
"I no longer feel a need to prove my worth" So very true!

Nice transitions throughout.
05/30/07
Great poem. We are all better in Christ. Have a great day.
05/30/07
This is wonderful. I especially like what I'd call the chorus parts, they just made this poem "sing"!
05/30/07
Oh yes! The difference He makes is amazing!
Neat progession, with an awesome ending!
05/30/07
Great contrasts - this touched me.