The Official Writing Challenge
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I like this -- very thought provoking. Nice job.
The scripture here fits this timely poem.
Wonderfully written, I loved how you brought it to the end to make it seem as if the person were reflecting after recieving eternal life.
Great piece filled with fond memories. Good work.
Your poem is a god example of how we view time. When I turned 50, then 70 suddenly didn't seem so "old"! A great reminder of how fleeting life truly is.
Time is such a fleeting thing, isn't it? Everything else of this world comes and goes, but time is the only thing which is carefully measured out to us at birth - a wasted hour can NEVER be reclaimed. Very nice (and deep) thoughts here.
I like your progression through time. And how it impacts us at each stage of our lives. Good job.