The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/07
I like this -- very thought provoking. Nice job.
The scripture here fits this timely poem.
Wonderfully written, I loved how you brought it to the end to make it seem as if the person were reflecting after recieving eternal life.
05/26/07
Great piece filled with fond memories. Good work.
05/26/07
Your poem is a god example of how we view time. When I turned 50, then 70 suddenly didn't seem so "old"! A great reminder of how fleeting life truly is.
05/26/07
Time is such a fleeting thing, isn't it? Everything else of this world comes and goes, but time is the only thing which is carefully measured out to us at birth - a wasted hour can NEVER be reclaimed. Very nice (and deep) thoughts here.
I like your progression through time. And how it impacts us at each stage of our lives. Good job.