The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/07
Good job. Very nice.
05/25/07
Not real sure how the title tied to the body of work. The rhyme and meter was very good and you are a good writer. Although if you read Revelation thoroughly you will see that the church is not the bride (just a side lesson).
05/26/07
A VERY timely message; it's important to separate the true Church of Christ from the building on the corner - ESPECIALLY in our hearts. I liked the line, "And the modern church became a whore." Gutsy!
How far we've strayed. But God will put it all in perspective,
05/28/07
Interesting commentary. Much of what you've said is true, and it is a call to action for those who want to keep it from happening in their own branch of the Body
Your rhyme and rythym is nice. I feel that the church as a whole, is not doomed, there are some christians that are sincere believers -- of course, there are some who call themselves Christians that miss the mark. That will be their downfall when Christ comes for His children. Good job.