The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh the dilemma of choosing the right path. This tells the story well.
I liked this poem. Your descriptions of the more difficult traveled road and its reward at the end was well written.
Oh, how happy to behold the jewels of the new Jerusalem; while the golden gate may glitter for a lifetime, those jewels will shine forever. Thank you for the trip down heavenly streets.
I really liked this, you can see and feel the hardship of life revealed in the first two verses followed by the reward of the last two. Well done.
Wonderfully vivid descriptions. Nicely done
Great job. Beautiful imagery.