The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/07
Oh the dilemma of choosing the right path. This tells the story well.
05/26/07
I liked this poem. Your descriptions of the more difficult traveled road and its reward at the end was well written.
05/26/07
Oh, how happy to behold the jewels of the new Jerusalem; while the golden gate may glitter for a lifetime, those jewels will shine forever. Thank you for the trip down heavenly streets.
05/26/07
I really liked this, you can see and feel the hardship of life revealed in the first two verses followed by the reward of the last two. Well done.
05/28/07
Wonderfully vivid descriptions. Nicely done
05/28/07
Great job. Beautiful imagery.