The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/07
Great details, nice use of the memory device to get the reader up to speed. Good job :)
05/17/07
This is a moving piece.

SisJ
05/20/07
I was moved. The title caught my attention too. Well done.
05/24/07
What a magnificent piece! Very lovely in its frame, artistic in its makeup, and pointed in its purpose!
05/24/07
Congratulations on your first place. This is hauntingly good.

I'll see you up in Advanced :) Sheri
05/24/07
Congratulations! Your story certainly deserved the win. :)
07/02/07
Very good story! It definately deserved to win! Congratulations!