The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/07
Great descriptions...Loved the ending - hehehe....
05/17/07
What a fun story! I loved that they took and returned a car. If you're looking at the world from the outside, that's the perfect thing to study in order to learn about Earth.
05/21/07
I, too, was hoping for more to happen in this nicely written story, but the ending made up for the brevity. I loved the image of the regurgitated Volvo!