The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/07
Great descriptions...Loved the ending - hehehe....
05/17/07
What a fun story! I loved that they took and returned a car. If you're looking at the world from the outside, that's the perfect thing to study in order to learn about Earth.
I, too, was hoping for more to happen in this nicely written story, but the ending made up for the brevity. I loved the image of the regurgitated Volvo!