The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/07
Hehehe - great twist at the end :)
05/17/07
Yes, great ending! I enjoyed the story.
05/21/07
The ending just cracked me up! (I understand, I understand!)
Cute! Well written.
05/21/07
Great description, and I also loved the ending.
05/21/07
What a fun read! Good description.
05/23/07
This is very clever.
All the obscure references make perfect sense...on second reading after the ending makes everything clear. You are one brilliant writer, I have to say!
Sci-fi of the mind ^8^