The Official Writing Challenge
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Nicely done...Love the spiritual warfare touch.
Fun! You captured the boy's bravado, that's just how boys that age are! ;-) I loved the last line.
I really enjoyed this! Great dialogue, characterizaton, and humor. I loved the way the alien character kept addressing the main boy as "one called Grubb" and also how Grubb said he was almost twelve--a man!
I like this one a lot. Very creative idea!
Good writing. I was "into" the story. Several punctuation errors. And "passed" should have been "past". But the story took shape well.