The Official Writing Challenge
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Nicely done -loved the "big picture" and talking about the size of their monitors lol. I'll always prefer holding those real books, too :)
We all need something real to interact with, don't we? Real hugs, real smiles, real love - and thankfully, we have a real God!
I enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing!
Oh, that was neat! I'm definately an old-fashioned person--and I collect books, too. :-) she'd be appalled by the smallness of my monitor, but at least she found the One. :-) good job! Hugs!
Great title, and I was charmed by the passion for collecting "old" things. Very sweet.
This is a wonderfully written piece. The futuristic was actually believable. The characters are good, the dialogue nice. Very well done.
Enjoyed this glimpse fo the future. Wonderful writing!
Great story! Great idea opening with the diary entry.
You may be interested to know that my eldest daughter is called Kerrie-Anne, and her nick-name is "Kez".
I love this story, and especially about how the MC can love Jesus, in spite of the futuristic setting in which she is from.