The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/07
VERY well done - ah the trouble with knowing the future... Saw the end coming, knew it was coming and couldn't stop it -anymore than the MC could.
I didn't see it coming until he started to hit himself. Great writing. I really like this one. :)
I didn't see it coming either. How sad. I felt so sorry for his wife, finding him like that.
Wow, this one is not only creative - it is convicting. Far too often we let fear get in the way of love. Excellent job!
This is a wonderfully written piece. Scary and sad, too. Great job.
05/18/07
This was a well-written but sobering story of technology being abused. I'm not sure I completely understand why he went to the extreme of committing suicide, though. Your concept was very creative, and it shows how often we want to know what we shouldn't know!!