The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/07
A good start, could have been expanded a bit more, but has some interesting things going on :)
05/20/07
Yes, a strange encounter of a foreign type. I dislike Sci Fi...but you captured it I think?? It's alien to me. Kudos!
Very tense situation. Good writing.