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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Christmas (04/25/05)

TITLE: A Schoolmarm's Christmas Memories
By Chris Miller
04/25/05


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“Mrs. Giggy,” the nurse’s aid announced her presence as she knocked lightly
on door number 57. “It’s time for your medicine. I could hear you coughing down
the hall and thought I’d try to make you more comfortable.”

Dora woke from her cat nap and acknowledged Sally with a smile and a nod.
“Oh, thank you, dear. You all take such good care of me.” The white-haired lady
cheerfully rewarded her helper with a pat on the hand and a flash of her lively blue
eyes.

“I just wish all our patients were as agreeable as you,” Sally chuckled. “By the
way, some carolers from the Shore Mennonite church will be visiting in a half hour.
Do you want me to keep your door open or closed?”

“Oh, I love to hear the old Christmas carols. It reminds me of my days in the
one- room school. The children and I used to sing them from Thanksgiving till
Christmas break. Please, leave my door open so I can enjoy the music.”

After the aide left, Dora gazed out the window into the courtyard. Snowflakes
fell softly, covering the evergreens with a blanket of white. Red and blue lights
provided welcome relief from the fading afternoon gloom.

Weary from coughing, she once again closed her eyes and drifted back to that
classroom of fifty years ago.

“Children, do any of you have a tree on your farm that would be suitable to
decorate for Christmas?” the schoolmarm’s eyes twinkled in anticipation.

Hands flew up in response. “I do, I do!” the voices of the Amish children rose
in chorus, competing for their teacher’s attention.

“Well, let’s see, Eli, you live close to the school. Do you think your papa would
mind cutting one of your evergreens down and hauling it over next Friday
morning?”

“Yes, ma’am, I’m sure he can!” From her experiences of living with the local
families, she knew that Mr. Bontrager would be glad to hitch up his team for their
Christmas festivities.

Later the next week, the children stared in awed silence as Eli and Mrs. Giggy
steadied the Douglas fir into the red metal stand. Even bare it added life to the drafty
room.

Depression years were difficult ones. Dora had saved every bit of tin foil she
could get her hands on. She passed out her little treasures to circles of children,
who twisted the foil into sparkly ornaments to decorate the tree. Next, she set a
large cast-iron kettle on the wood burning stove to pop some corn for stringing.

Nellie broke into the first verse of “Oh Christmas Tree” and they all joined in.
Even without accompaniment, they sounded like angels in her memory.

When the tree was adorned with all the festive ornaments, Leroy, the tall eighth
grader was picked to put the star on top. He hadn’t seemed too excited about the
Christmas project until she called his name for this special task. His eyes lit with
pleasure; Dora knew her students and what would motivate.

As she cherished this long ago Christmas, the sounds of “God Rest Ye Merry
Gentlemen” wafted down the nursing home hallway. Tears trickled down her
wrinkled cheek as she mouthed the familiar words. Ninety-eight years had brought
many Christmases, but none were quite as special as those spent with the Amish
children back in her one-room country school.


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vicki mccollum05/02/05
A beautiful story and told very well.
Angela Ranson05/03/05
Great use of flashback to make this a very touching story
donna robinson05/03/05
This was so well written. So many memories as we grow older and you made us care for this person and see life for a moment through her eyes.
Leticia Caroccio05/05/05
Thank you for the glimpse into this story of a time long ago. I read it with interest.
Suzanne R05/06/05
Very beautiful!
Deborah Porter 05/09/05
Chris, Congratulations on your 6th place win in the Editors' Choice. Our Level 2 entrants did so well this week and the ratings were so close! The majority of winners and semi-finalists were within a breath of one another. So well done. If you feel ready, I'd encourage you to move up to Level 3. I think you're ready for it. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
Lois Jennison Tribble05/11/05
Chris,
Congratulations on your placement with this charming story. You did a great job introducing Dora and integrating the flashback -- I enjoyed reading!