The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent job bringing this story to life!
05/11/07
Nicely done. You've brought out an aspect of the Sodom/Lot thing that I'd never given thought: Would the families outside the city know what had happened or if there loved ones lived? And the hard thing--trusting in God's wisdom and mercy, even when we don't understand his plan.
05/14/07
The dialogue here had a culturally-authentic feel. Nice exposition of a much-referenced but rarely developed story. Be careful of punctuation errors as they can distract. All in all a nice effort!