The Official Writing Challenge
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Another great Civil War entry. Good research and a well-written narrative. I especially liked the part about the POW camp and how you showed the perspective from the homefront. Well done!
05/10/07
Well told. It is interesting when history comes alive in story form. You did a good job!
05/11/07
Very enjoyable story with a highly authentic "feel" to it!
You did a great job portraying both the "at home" and "in battle" aspects of the conflict. :)
WOw, well done. I loved it. The story felt so alive, so real, well done!
Good story. Very well written. There is one spot (known what was to befall he and his fellow soldiers). This should be him and his fellow soldiers) Probably even better as (his fellow soldiers and him.)But this is minor and the writing is still very good.
Stacey, Beautiful story, well told, I could feel the suffering and longing to be home...Dave Palmieri